Editing and proofreading my personal statement

Instructions: Degree (International Business Management) Please feel free to ask me questions in order to make further adjustments. Most of the degrees that I will apply to are business related. Also, feel free to ADD more and make it as amazing as possible. In paragraph 2 if you have better books and quotes, feel free to change. The flow and structure need to be perfect. Make as many edits and changes as it needs.

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